I asked 10 people a few questions about what they thought of our short film pitch. These were their answers:
1.Is the title of the film 'A Different Perspective' appropriate?
100% said yes
Are there any suggestions on an alternative name?
70% said no and the other suggestions were 'Christmas Tree', 'That Time Of The Year' and 'Stolen From The Woods'
2. Do you think the concept is clear and appealing?
90% said yes 10% said it would be easier to understand once the short film was made
Are there any suggested comparisons to films?
100% said they couldn't think of any films it would be similar to
3. Is the narrative clear and appealing?
Did you like the:
Plot - 100% said yes Structure - 100% said yes Twist - 100% said yes Enigma - 90% said yes Ending - 100% said yes
Can you suggest any room for improvement?
30% said some scary background music would make the short film more intense
4. Do the characters sound believable?
100% said yes
Is there any stereotyping?
80% said no 20% said yes when they read the christmas scene as the family were dressed in wooly christmas jumpers.
Are the characters functional?
100% said yes
5. Is the setting and location effective?
100% said yes
Are there any suggestions for other locations or settings?
30% said the place where christmas trees are sold
Are the costume and props effective?
100% said yes
Are there any suggestions for costumes and props?
20% said that the axe man should wear lumberjack clothes
7. Do you think the themes of time and technology are effective?
100% said yes
8. Is the pitch appropriate for the target audience?
100% said yes
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